Listening to October rain
prepare Winter's stones
for the coming festival of cold
And the stripping away of gold
and green,
I see trees denude themselves
in a demystification of old -
the ritual celebration of bones.
Above the silent dates of tombs,
the sky hovers, blue and unsure
of beauty's welcome here -
but this is the time
for the colour change;
Not quite black yet,
these are the shades of grey.
- Shaista Tayabali, 2010
(illustration from
Magpie Tales, online creative writing group)
Shaista! This is simply beautiful! I especially like the closing line..."not quite black yet, these are the shades of grey".
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Magpie, dear friend! So fun to have you participate. xx
ritual celebration of bones...nice description of the season...nice magpie!
ReplyDeleteA perfect description of autumn into winter. Wonderful words,
ReplyDeleteshades of grey- just great!
ReplyDeletewhat a vivid description.. its like the fall is dying and winter is being born.. lovely wordplay!
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This is so good!
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vivid thoughts!nice magpie
ReplyDeleteYours is a brilliant mapgie. Even without the image I would see what you have described.
ReplyDeleteyes to that.
ReplyDeleteThis was incredibly beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteShaista - you really have talent! I love reading your poetry :)
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