I Write My Face
Upon My Age
In Lines
Of Poetry -
I Right My Wrongs
Up On The Stage
For All The World
To See.
© Shaista Tayabali, 2012
image prompt: red spot II, wassily kandinsky, 1921, magpie tales
poetry prompt: dverse
Tuesday, 31 January 2012
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19 comments:
I like this.
Two stanzas that could stand on there own. Nice write.
nice...than perform it loud for all to hear...because it is very well done...smiles.
What beautiful poem...so elegantly expressed and the painting reminds me of Kandinsky. Living with Lupus is a constant balancing act that is often recorded on our faces and in our eyes. Peace be with you, Mary Helen Fernandez Stewart
This is lovely ... beautifully composed.
Fine verses. Live with courage.
This is just SO good!
living out loud . . . . steven
Nice and beautiful ))
I love it, in fact I think this one is my favorite poem of yours :-)
A stunning write Shaista! That first line is amazing!!
This poem is stunning ... I'm still processing it!
Very nice...
I love this poem. So zen.
I really enjoyed the second stanza
An excellent interpretation for this Mag, thank you.
confidence is a beautiful coat to wear with the finest...
Lovely lines - hope you are keeping well
Isabel x
Lovely. We should all have such courage. Thank you.
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